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小升初英语记叙文写作指导

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  小升初英语考试中,作文占据了不可忽视的地位。如何写好小升初英语作文?其实写作都是从模仿开始的,而优秀的英语范文是英语写作模仿的优质对象。下面是小编为您收集整理的,供大家参考!

  

  一、记叙文的特点

  1.叙述的人称

  英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:

  The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

  用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:

  Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.

  2.动词的时态

  在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

  3.叙述的顺序

  记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得*铺直叙,读起来*淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。

  4.叙述的过渡

  过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:

  In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

  The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

  英语书面表达分类模句

  人物写照、人物写照、生*事迹

  开头***外貌、年龄等基本信息***

  He was from a poor peasant’s family.

  He is about 1.72 meters in height by the age of 14, he had taught himself advanced mathematics.

  She is already in her fifties, but she looks younger for her age.

  He is short and thin with a pair of thick glasses.

  She is tall and slim with big dark eyes and black hair.

  My English teacher, Miss Zhang, is a middle-aged woman.

  中间***事迹、为人***

  She often helps those who have difficulty in doing their homework.

  With her help, I have caught up with my classmates.

  At the age of eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province. A few years later, he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world Champion.

  He graduated from Qinghua University in 1982.

  He has his own way of teaching.

  He has much knowledge and good at teaching.

  All these years he has been working hard.

  Many times he has been praised for his excellent work.

  He gets on very well with us students.

  He is not only our good teacher but also our good friend.

  He is honest and always ready to help others.

  That’s why we made him monitor.

  We all considered her pronunciation to be the best of all.

  He is a worthy person for us to learn from.

  An American company wanted to employ him with high pay, but he refused.

  He received a doctor’s degree in 1988.

  He is strict with us and careful in his work.

  He won the first prize in the physics contest.

  He devoted all his life to education.

  结尾***名声、成果等***

  He is loved and respected by us all.

  She is considered as one of the best teachers year by year.

  With his help, we have made great progress in our studies.

  He will always be remembered as a great leader, a wise and warm-hearted man.

  He is regarded as a fighter by most of the people in the world.

  Miss Zhang is such a good teacher that we all love her very much.

  Such was Elbert Einstein, a man of great achievements.



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